Two Haikus, two kinds of waves:
Trying to Forget
A Haiku
Waves sweep onto shore,
grasp my memories and flee,
drag them to the depths.
Home from War
A Haiku
The child stood waving.
Who is this man called daddy?
Why is he crying?
Sensational Haiku Wednesday–Waves
Posted by Victoria C. Slotto on October 6, 2010
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/sensational-haiku-wednesday-waves/
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Jingle
/ October 10, 2010http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/
take the awards after you are done,
for Poets Rally, 3 poems can be submitted….
also, vote your favorite poets after you finish your initial 18 commenting….
Thanks a lot!
have fun!
liv2write2day
/ October 10, 2010Thank you, Jingle. I accept and have posted on awards page.
RiA
/ October 9, 2010Those are both so good! The second one is especially poignant.
liv2write2day
/ October 9, 2010Thanks so much for dropping by, RiA
Jingle
/ October 8, 2010http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-30/
the perfect poet award for you…
Melanie Bishop
/ October 8, 2010Very powerful and moving words.
Melanie
liv2write2day
/ October 8, 2010Thanks for your visit, Melanie.
Jenn @ You know...that Blog?
/ October 7, 2010Very nicely done!
You can pick up the link back text (and graphic if you like, but only the text is necessary to participate) on my website for next time, ok? Thanks much
liv2write2day
/ October 8, 2010Thanks, Jenn. I’ll try to figure it out. I’m not the most tech-inclined person. Just learning lots of new things.
Amanda
/ October 7, 2010Your last Haiku broke my heart it was so endearing. Have an awesome Wednesday!
souldipper
/ October 6, 2010Wow, how to capture enormous feelings!
liv2write2day
/ October 8, 2010Imagine living through that.
gospelwriter
/ October 6, 2010Lovely haiku. The second is especially poignant, tears at my heartstrings.
liv2write2day
/ October 8, 2010Thank you, gospelwriter.
quilly
/ October 6, 2010Both poems evoke strong emotions. Very well done.
liv2write2day
/ October 6, 2010Thanks, quilly.
liv2write2day
/ October 6, 2010Haiku is fun, isn’t it?
Trisha
/ October 6, 2010fabulous pair. your poems are really fantastic.
Thom
/ October 6, 2010Your description on both of these is so right on point. I really like them point. And the second one is just beautiful.
Well done my friend 
liv2write2day
/ October 6, 2010Thanks, Thom.
penelopephoebe
/ October 6, 2010Cripes, I welled up reading your second haiku!
liv2write2day
/ October 6, 2010Ah, Penny–that’s the biggest compliment you could give me. Thanks.