Big Tent Poetry–My First Time!


  

October Waning

Early morning sun kisses the foothills
with hues of bronze and purple.
You descend the staircase.
I wait for your touch to heal my wounds.

As always, you gloss over my sadness,
take me in your arms as though I were a doll
abandoned by a child in a corner of the room.
Your love restores my hope for the moment.

At noon we wander in a field of pumpkin gourds.
Among a bed of drooping roses, one stands tall.
You slice its stem with your pocket knife,
inhale its fragrance then hand it to me.

When evening comes we sit together on the porch,
extract the last ray of light from day’s end.
You hook your arm in mine
and lead me gently back into the night.

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11 thoughts on “Big Tent Poetry–My First Time!

  1. pamela says:

    So beautiful!
    Pamela

  2. Susannah says:

    That is so beautiful and so sensitively written, I love it.

  3. .. sensual and romantic.. soft in all its beauty.. a lovely debut at BTP..

    this time was my third Wordle :) its here: http://wp.me/p11nRA-Al

  4. trisha says:

    What a beautiful, glorious day. splendid poem.

    shubho bijoyadashami (Happy vijayadashami)! May the Goddess fill your life up with beauty and happiness

  5. derrick2 says:

    Soft and gentle and, yes, totally unforced.

  6. Jingle says:

    wow,
    love the image.

  7. Tumblewords says:

    Oh, this is very nice! Love the imagery.

  8. S. Sharp says:

    It’s hard to write romance in poems… although many many did write about it… but you captured romance with these great lines… stnning words… I’m thankfull to read it.

    S.

  9. souldipper says:

    Good for you – brave one. Love the photo immensely. And thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Makes me want to know a bunch more about her.

  10. gospelwriter says:

    This is truly beautiful – the pic and the poem chock full of word pictures. Sensitive, romantic, and natural – no sign of forcing wordle words to fit. I love it!

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