thirteen ways of looking at trees
i
trees know
to bend with the wind
otherwise they will snap.
ii
in the winter
trees seem to die
that is when
they send down roots
a lot happens
beneath the surface
iii
some people are like trees
they reach out
comfort
provide food
shelter
beauty
iv
others
like some trees
are invasive they
choke
stifle
lesser life forms
v
trees
like some people
survive
without a lot of attention
nature provides
water
food
sometimes if they are weak
they need support
now and again
you have to prune
dead branches
vi
if you plant a tree
you are responsible for it
make sure you choose
with care
it like adopting
a child or
a pet
due diligence is needed
before you commit
vii
everyone should have
a special tree
to hold in memory
a place to go
when you are
afraid
tired
lonely
in that way
a tree is like
a mother’s lap
viii
once you put down roots
you will grow
if you become at one
with your place in life
ix
learn from trees
even though they have differences
they are all trees
they belong together
x
trees are like families
sometimes
they have to give way
to make room
for one another
xi
even though trees
come in many different colors
they are still trees
contrast makes them
stand out
outstanding
xii
when you puncture
a tree’s trunk
with nails
it will bleed
when you puncture
another’s heart
with words
it too will bleed
xiii
in time trees
like people
will die
to make room
for new life.
I’m linking this poem to One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry: http://onestoppoetry.com The inspiration came from a prompt posted by Brian Miller on that same website for Friday Poetically. It is based on the art of Alison Jardine, the artist behind the image above. For some truly amazing art, visit her site at http://alisonjardine.com This poetry is also reminiscent of a form of poetry perfected by Wallace Stevens.





dani
/ July 4, 2011stunning!
Jamie Dedes
/ July 3, 2011A perfect homage to the awesome tree. Nice!
ALIVE aLwaYs
/ July 1, 2011worthy inspiration drawn from trees, 13 wise poetic stanzas, I liked them a lot!!!
Baishali
/ July 1, 2011wow such a unique poem … almost scientific and so well said.
Becca Givens
/ June 30, 2011WOW … I really really like this piece … all 13 segments of it. Thank you for the timely spiritual message cloaked in the wonders of nature.
Broken Sparkles
/ June 30, 2011in the winter
trees seem to die
that is when
they send down roots
a lot happens
beneath the surface …
this part I like the best!
b_y
/ June 29, 2011Oh,yeah. I liked that image, too. Oddly, it made me think of roots, in spite of the sunny colors, so I’m glad for your viii.
Enjoyed your 13
Elizabeth Young
/ June 29, 2011Beautiful! I immediately thought of Shel Silverstein’s book: “The Giving Tree.”
liv2write2day
/ June 29, 2011Oh, that’s a wonderful book. I haven’t read it in years.
Inside the Mind of Isadora
/ June 29, 2011I have a GREAT love of trees. They are so well descibed here. I loved all of it but the first one, for me, say it all …. trees know to bend with the wind otherwise they will snap ….
Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we would all learn to bend with the wind?????
Namaste,
Izzy
trisha
/ June 29, 2011this is too beautiful!
dreamingthruthetwilight
/ June 29, 2011How nicely you have put together the anthromorphic charactericitics of trees or should I say the vegetative aspects of Man? Eventually, it is same source that runs through everything isn’t it? Even at the level of mundane matter, trees and man are made up the same elements….carbon, hydrogen, nitrogen etsc…may be a little mor e of this and a little less of that.
Fiducia
/ June 29, 2011Comparison is so distinct here…my favorite was number 5!! each had a striking pause to it..beautiful!!
knightsheart
/ June 29, 2011I like the way you put down roots on this comparison and grew it full cycle.
Carol Ann Hoel
/ June 29, 2011I love trees. I am drawn to trees. Beautiful poem, Victoria. When my kids were little, I used to sing a little verse that made them laugh, or not. It went like this: God is good to me; He keeps me in a tree. They would roll their eyes and say, MOM, stop it. Blessings to you…
Bodhirose
/ June 29, 2011I really enjoyed this immensely, Victoria.
siggiofmaine
/ June 29, 2011I really like the 13 images of trees…you really thought about this relationship or built up the images over years… poignant and meaningful images. Thank you for the beauty of your words.
☮ Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
souldipper
/ June 29, 2011I certainly enjoyed these bids of appreciation for our beloved wooden friends.
Man, trees have popped up in so many of my favourite blogs recently. Before this discovery, while I meditated against my Maple tree, I was asked to write about “her”. My response was along the lines of, “Woot?”
I suspect it is yet another level of spiritual exposure being asked of me. Feels like exhibitionism!
I am not in a hurry.
Fred Rutherford
/ June 28, 2011Really good piece. I enjoyed it from the first to last stanza. Very creative poem thanks for sharing:)
brian
/ June 28, 2011ah a doubt tree-t then today…glad you played with alisons pic…in 13 ways no less…there is much we can get from sitting and pondering the tree…you pull some fine metaphors out of it…well played valerie
Luke Prater
/ June 28, 2011really like tis one V. Love how it progresses, starting out a little formal and almost like a botanical guidebook, and as it develops, the simile/analogy of trees for human beings gets stronger (and more poetic). Excellence
Anna
/ June 28, 2011So much we can learn from trees; I love trees too… you did a superb job of showing us 13 ways to look at (and learn from) a tree… lovely, I liked this piece.
jgavinallan
/ June 28, 2011Victoria..”when you puncture another’s heart”…that caught my attention
lovely description and relation to a life of a human
Jaye
Pat Hatt
/ June 28, 2011Wow from start to finish with trees and all different ways of looking at them with such great comparisions to life, nicely done.