This is my first visit to “One Stop Poetry” and I thank moondustwriter for intoducing me to it. I’d like to post a poem published a few years ago in a small literary magazine:
Mortality
A dead quail lay on the path,
legs extended
grasping the last touch of life,
eyelids sealing off earth’s beauty forever.
Layers of gold feathers
zigzagged its empty breast.
Clods of earth soiled
the handiwork of some obscure Artisan.
I knelt to honor
nature’s defiled chalice,
scooped the chilled stiff form into a plastic bag.
It landed with a thud in the empty garbage can.
Isn’t that they way it goes too. A moment of honor and then thud. It’s all over.
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Thanks for all your comments, Jamie. Have a restful day and a productive week ahead.
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i think i need to thank leslie personally for getting you involved…a wonderful write and can see why it was published…i loved the beauty of the piece that is cut short with its sudden despatch into the bin…cheers pete
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Thanks, Pete. And thanks for hosting this site. Got to read some great poetry!
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This is so sad. It hurts to think such a beautiful creature could be discarded as trash.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/moon-over-the-corn/
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Shutting down the earth’s beauty… loved it and specially the “Thud” as it got me there with you watching the slow motion movie of the drop…
Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Connect with me on Twitter at @VerseEveryDay to read one verse everyday on life, love and longing…
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Thanks so much, Shashi.
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An unexpected twist to one’s final physical fate yet it is a stark reality. I love the delicate expressions then the jarring end. Hope to see more of you at One Stop.
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Thank you…I hope to be back. It seems life has taken a poetic turn for me, but it could be I’m avoiding a rewrite of novel #2. :0)
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Wonderful expressed this beauty and then the cold reality of what actually happens…over with a thud….so much for ode to a bird…..bkm
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Thanks, bkm, for your thoughtful comments.
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The finality of its undignifying fate. So sad! You write so simply and expressively. I really enjoyed this.
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I appreciate your stopping by, Tony.
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oh wow. the emoion is echoed in the bottom of that trash can…i would have knelt in honor as well…
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Thanks for checking it out Brian. This is a true story.
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…”the handiwork of some obscure Artisan…” I like that a lot. Thanks for the One Shot!
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Thanks so much, Tim.
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This is great! We can;t runaway from death. It’s never going to be pretty.
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So true. Thanks for stopping by, Jean-Michel.
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stunning words…
love the flow…
Happy Wednesday!
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Thank you for all your support, Jingle.
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