Poetry Potluck–Thunderstorm


Thunderstorm in Kansas

Image via Wikipedia

 

The jaundiced sky turned dark
then belched
after a flash of heartburn. 

20 thoughts on “Poetry Potluck–Thunderstorm

  1. Shashi says:

    Beautifully painted the scenario.. loved it.. thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  2. Shashi says:

    Bautifully painted the scenario.. loved it.. thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  3. Jingle says:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/thursday-poets-rally-week-30/

    welcome to Rally week 30,
    a most 3 poems are accepted within 7 days…
    Happy Thursday!

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  4. Gretchen says:

    😀 This is a fun read–great personification!

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  5. trisha says:

    what an expression! wow!

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  6. wow. really interesting choice of words. never really thought of the sky that way…

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  7. Jamie Dedes says:

    Just plan fun. Thanks! 🙂

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  8. revbillcook says:

    Nice image. Fun to read. Memorable. I enjoyed this. – bill

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  9. Luke Prater says:

    wow this too… ‘jaundiced sky.. love that…

    Luke

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  10. souldipper says:

    Loved the personification! And being a prairie girl, I love the photo.

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  11. tekia says:

    Ha! I like this. You used senses and imagery wonderfully here. Nice piece!

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  12. gospelwriter says:

    awesome image. the visual and your words… I wonder if the heartburn had anything to do with the way we poison our atmosphere?

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  13. Jingle says:

    I see t storm happening in your words.
    powerful post.
    well done!

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