Sensational Haiku Wednesday–The Ace of Cups


The Ace of Cups
A Haiku

You can swim freestyle,
surging through troubled waters,
taking charge of life.

I prefer to float,
gently borne upon a wave,
surrendered to grace.

Submitted to Sensational Haiku Wednesday:  This week’s theme is freestyle. Stop by and enjoy some great poetry a la haiku.

13 thoughts on “Sensational Haiku Wednesday–The Ace of Cups

  1. tigerbrite says:

    I agree, it’s always better to go with the flow. Nice haiku, and picture too.


  2. souldipper says:

    Me, too! Simple and complete!


  3. Jingle says:

    your Haiku is always lovely.


  4. KB says:

    I love the freedom of floating. Beautiful.


  5. Sometimes you float, sometimes you strike out on your own. The trick is to identify when each of those is appropriate 🙂 Well done!


  6. Artswebshow says:

    Two very interesting haiku’s here


  7. deadpoet88 says:

    Very meaningful haiku, I find myself floating more often than swimming. Though I am not sure which I prefer.


  8. I love water and this is so fresh. Thanks again for a simple line(s). You refreshed my mind


  9. amanda says:

    this is very soothing I would much rather float on that wave as well!


  10. Thom says:

    I think I’m more freestyle but I do believe we all have a little of both. Well done my friend. And we don’t get older. Just better. :). Happy Hallowen.


  11. PinkLady says:

    riding the tide is the only way to go. go with the flow, as they say. and yes, float your way through is the best way to ride the tide.

    these are brilliant, insightful pieces, victoria!


  12. gospelwriter says:

    I’m much better at floating myself – not a strong swimmer.:) Love your haiku pair!


  13. L.L. Barkat says:

    “I prefer to float”

    I can feel that. The buoyancy that calls.


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