Jingle’s Poetry Rally–“Sunrise on a Plane”

Sunrise (on the way from Gothenburg to Copenhagen)

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Sunrise on a Plane

At earth’s black edge
an artist applies a wash of
orange—wet on wet,
teases color from the center,
adds more water then
works in a pale shade
of blue.

Submitted to Jingle’s Poetry Rally Week 32



28 thoughts on “Jingle’s Poetry Rally–“Sunrise on a Plane”

  1. hope_rising says:

    very nice poem, what a beautiful depiction of a sunrise … thanks so much!


  2. Amity says:

    a very beautiful work of art Victoria and as well as lovely verses… 🙂

    glad I found you at Thursday Poets Rally, coz you’ve been to my place lots of times.. thanks so much Victoria, now I will be a regular to your space na… 🙂


  3. Ms. Peaches says:

    this makes me wish I was watching the sun rise…what a beauty that is and a wonderful depiction with your words! as always glad I stopped by my friend


  4. Jingle says:

    Hello, how are you?
    return favors to poets who are here for you,
    do 18 NEW comments….
    let me know after you are done.
    Thanks for the attention!
    Happy Saturday! xxx

    here is mine:


  5. Jamie Dedes says:

    Beautifull written and illustrated. I can see the watercolor in my minds eye. Nice work!

    Poem on …

    Happy Rally days …


  6. lynnaima says:

    interesting!! 🙂


  7. great poem. totally took me to the seat on an airplane at sunrise, looking at the window at the world. lovely. well done!


  8. Shashi says:

    Vry vividly picturiesed and I like it so much.. in so few words, the horizon painted… thanks for your sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com


  9. Olivia says:

    Your work is simply amazing; it is even more beautiful when you share your talent with other poets. Come in and join us for another week’s potluck fun,
    Any poem is welcome. We love poets, we enjoy poetry, and your participation makes us smile!
    Keep up the excellence.
    Let me know if you need help linking…
    Happy November,
    Happy Weekend.


  10. Olivia says:

    Victoria sweetheart, this is so beautiful.. I am amazed- very well done.. 🙂
    Loads of Hugs- xox


  11. Sumit Sarkar says:

    what a beautiful picture and very well painted with words… 🙂


  12. Marit says:

    I like “wet on wet”


  13. Rajlakshmi says:

    waoo what a lovely and colorful imagery 😀
    loved the picture you painted through your words.
    well written


  14. bward42 says:

    So simple, and so effective! Using a few well chosen words really gives your poem such an impact!


  15. Jingle says:

    Happy Rally,
    Thanks for the support.
    I was busy with other stuff, sorry for being late on commenting…

    keep rocking.
    love this piece.
    stunning imagery.


  16. Jingle says:

    an artist applies a wash of
    orange—wet on wet,
    teases color from the center,
    adds more water …

    magical lines,
    lovely done.


  17. Victoria, this is like breathtaking.. loved the imagery.. and the image..

    Rally Week 32, My Entry


  18. Heart says:

    Something I often enjoy one on one, when on a 24 hour flight to India, because I have a layover, I sometimes manage to see two mornings in two continents.. Nice idea for a poem!


  19. Anita (Aquarius63) says:

    A beautiful poem.



  20. Bodhirose says:

    What a nice perspective of how sunrises come to be. How beautiful! Maybe you are on your way to your mother and are looking out of the airplane window–my good wishes go with you. xoxo


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