Leonnyes Z to A Challenge: “G” is for Gem


Nearly octahedral diamond crystal in matrix.

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Submitted to Leonnyes Z to A Challenge:  http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/

 Flawless Gem
a Cascade

You are like
a flawless gem
in pure gold.

I can’t find words
to aptly say what
you are like.

Not brilliant star
nor dancing flame nor yet
a flawless gem

describes the joy
that I would etch
in pure gold.

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11 thoughts on “Leonnyes Z to A Challenge: “G” is for Gem

  1. Jingle says:

    Gem is beautiful.
    cute take on G.

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  2. Rumya says:

    That’s one stone I don’t mind someone throwing at me 😉 LOL 😀

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  3. beautiful poetry 🙂 loved it.

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  4. trisha says:

    were you describing this poem? it fitted perfectly if your poetry is described in this poem.

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  5. budhaaah says:

    your poetry flows like a flawless gem 🙂

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  6. Amity says:

    Beautiful words to describe a gem, yet you still feel lacking of it…

    lovely poem Victoria!

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  7. The pristine, perfect joy of love … another lovingly wrought poem by you. Thank you!

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  8. Nanka says:

    A woman’s best friend, and a flawless one at that too is a dream come true!!

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  9. 2zpoint says:

    Beautiful description of how you feel about someone you love. Take care!

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  10. lynnaima says:

    indescribable yet we try to anyway! 🙂 nice!

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  11. suzicate says:

    “what I would etch in pure gold” – excellent. This is truly lovely!

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