Sensational Haiku Wednesday–“Inhibition”


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Submitted to Sensational Haiku Wednesday for which today’s theme is Inhibition.

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Inhibition

A bashful rose bud
refused to open because
the tree was watching.

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9 thoughts on “Sensational Haiku Wednesday–“Inhibition”

  1. Madeleine says:

    Original interpretation. Nicely done :O)

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  2. RiA says:

    Sweet poem – love how well it works with the picture!

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  3. trisha says:

    this is splendid victoria. so very sweet.

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  4. Nanka says:

    Loved the imagery of a bashful rose blushing pink!! Such a wonderful Haiku too 🙂 sweet and gentle.

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  5. Great interpretation of theme – nicely done!

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  6. Amity says:

    short and sweet Victoria… 🙂

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  7. Totally sweet, Victoria. And too familiar! 🙂

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  8. jazzbumpa says:

    Open your petals,
    Rose. The sheltering tree would
    Gaze on your beauty.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  9. Bodhirose says:

    Oh, I’ve felt exactly this way before. Lovely, Victoria.

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