Jingle’s Poetry Potluck–Dream


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Submitted to Jingle’s Poetry Potluck. Today’s theme is Dreams, Visions. Check out some wonderful seasoned and upcoming poets at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

Dream

Last night I dreamt of

feathers and shape-shifting.

Today a wren perches on a naked branch

outside my window.

By afternoon

the tree is in full bloom.

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33 thoughts on “Jingle’s Poetry Potluck–Dream

  1. ladynimue says:

    wow !! what a beauty :))

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  2. Shashi says:

    Beautiful.. what a picture… I like it.
    Full Bloom

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Tweet me @VerseEveryDay

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  3. deLiderata says:

    the portal of dreams houses so much possibilities, and one of my favorite is that “shape-shifting”

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  4. A.B. Thomas says:

    nicely done!

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  5. Beautiful image and words, wonderfully written =P

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  6. dasuntoucha says:

    Wow…this is a pretty cool piece…short yet superb.

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  7. suzicate says:

    great job on this one, love the vision of it!

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  8. Talon says:

    This was so soft and beautiful and magical, Victoria.

    My potluck: so maybe

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  9. Tilly Bud says:

    This is gorgeous.

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  10. gracefulglider says:

    naked branch…, tree in full bloom… truly a dream!

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  11. Evelyn says:

    oh!
    this is simply breathtaking!!

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  12. Lyn says:

    This is quite magical..I like it so much!

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  13. trisha says:

    just awesom victoria. Simply awesome. it must have been a premonition.

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  14. gospelwriter says:

    Ah, lovely… synchronicity in action (or something like it). A beautiful poem showing the power of “dare to dream”. Thank you!

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  15. Ina says:

    Good strong flower of poetry 🙂

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  16. Is the tree blooming a dream or reality. They are mixed in you very interesting poem.

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  17. so many images packed into such few words… beautifully done!

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  18. fiveloaf says:

    oooooooooooooooooh this is nice liv! heres mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

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  19. Victoria, this is perfectly lovely. So much said in such a tight and efficient poem. Wonderful!

    Happy potluck and thanks for stopping by.

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  20. oh wow! i got chills up my spine. this touched me and spoke to me in such a personal way. I will not share the details, but thank you so much for sharing this. its truly beautiful and my day will be much brighter for it.
    Happy Potluck!
    P.S.
    Thanks for the kind comment on mine.
    Kellie

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  21. Jessicas Japes says:

    Love the fantasy element here. Beautifully written.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/snow/

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  22. Kodjo Deynoo says:

    An interesting write, leaves one wondering

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  23. souldipper says:

    Love the concept, the comparison – the whole succinct poem!

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  24. ScottlB says:

    nicely done thanks for sharing

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  25. booguloo says:

    If I were a psychic I would say great change is coming soon. Since I’m not I’ll say what a great imagination!

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  26. hope hayduk says:

    nice one! love it!
    thank you

    and thank you for your visit and comment today

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  27. Jingle says:

    beautiful..
    what a magical turn out.
    lovely entry.
    have fun!

    A+

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  28. Dennis says:

    Short yet astounding!

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  29. david waters says:

    ah, shape shifting…such wilkd dreams…love it

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  30. I love this…
    The world becomes what we dream about, and here your dreams are beautiful!

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  31. Melissa says:

    This is fantastic! Love the thought of a shape shifting bird or tree for that matter. Nicely penned.

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  32. Kavita says:

    Ahaa… when dreams (the good ones) reflect in reality, and are in close proximity to one another, it really is QUITE something!! Feels like some sort of a deja vu…
    I really enjoyed the deep meaning in your sparsely worded poem.. it’s superbly done!!

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