Image by Bandelier National Monument via Flickr
Submitted to Jingle’s Poetry Potluck. Today’s theme is Dreams, Visions. Check out some wonderful seasoned and upcoming poets at http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Dream
Last night I dreamt of
feathers and shape-shifting.
Today a wren perches on a naked branch
outside my window.
By afternoon
the tree is in full bloom.
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wow !! what a beauty :))
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Beautiful.. what a picture… I like it.
Full Bloom
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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the portal of dreams houses so much possibilities, and one of my favorite is that “shape-shifting”
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nicely done!
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Beautiful image and words, wonderfully written =P
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Wow…this is a pretty cool piece…short yet superb.
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great job on this one, love the vision of it!
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This was so soft and beautiful and magical, Victoria.
My potluck: so maybe
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This is gorgeous.
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naked branch…, tree in full bloom… truly a dream!
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oh!
this is simply breathtaking!!
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This is quite magical..I like it so much!
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just awesom victoria. Simply awesome. it must have been a premonition.
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Ah, lovely… synchronicity in action (or something like it). A beautiful poem showing the power of “dare to dream”. Thank you!
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Good strong flower of poetry 🙂
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Is the tree blooming a dream or reality. They are mixed in you very interesting poem.
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so many images packed into such few words… beautifully done!
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oooooooooooooooooh this is nice liv! heres mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
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Victoria, this is perfectly lovely. So much said in such a tight and efficient poem. Wonderful!
Happy potluck and thanks for stopping by.
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oh wow! i got chills up my spine. this touched me and spoke to me in such a personal way. I will not share the details, but thank you so much for sharing this. its truly beautiful and my day will be much brighter for it.
Happy Potluck!
P.S.
Thanks for the kind comment on mine.
Kellie
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Love the fantasy element here. Beautifully written.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/snow/
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An interesting write, leaves one wondering
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Love the concept, the comparison – the whole succinct poem!
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nicely done thanks for sharing
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If I were a psychic I would say great change is coming soon. Since I’m not I’ll say what a great imagination!
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nice one! love it!
thank you
and thank you for your visit and comment today
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Such marvelous imagery! I love this one.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/05/dreams-visions-and-reveries/
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beautiful..
what a magical turn out.
lovely entry.
have fun!
A+
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Short yet astounding!
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ah, shape shifting…such wilkd dreams…love it
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I love this…
The world becomes what we dream about, and here your dreams are beautiful!
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This is fantastic! Love the thought of a shape shifting bird or tree for that matter. Nicely penned.
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Ahaa… when dreams (the good ones) reflect in reality, and are in close proximity to one another, it really is QUITE something!! Feels like some sort of a deja vu…
I really enjoyed the deep meaning in your sparsely worded poem.. it’s superbly done!!
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