Here’s a fun and somewhat surprising challenge. Grab a hold of your dictionary and thumb through it. Choose between 10-30 words (verbs, nouns, adjectives and adverbs) that appeal to you, catch your fancy. Now, construct a poem using only those words. You may, however add the garnishments of articles, conjunctions etc. When you’ve finished, see if you’re not astonished to find a loosely-structured theme. It will probably be one of your more obscure poems but wait and see. Your subconscious may be hard at work in your word choices. I’ve done this a few times and it’s a great way of breaking out of a block, even if it doesn’t turn out to be one of your best poems. Here’s mine:
Afterbirth
Crimson sucklings thirst
for silken flesh.
Doves arc into the sky
unfolding hues
that dangle quiet flames.
Anoint her body,
dormant like a
wooden rocking horse,
alone in liquid,
aching for shelter.
Erase the anguish
of crowning.
Balance loss.
I’m feeling a bit dull myself today so I think I’ll work on another one. If you do this and post it, I would love for you to send me the link in comments.
I’ve tried another one, Victoria. ๐ It’s interesting what shows up when you choose the words beforehand!
http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2010/12/09/lacework/
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I will attempt it sure .. this weekend ๐
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I’d love to see what you come up with!
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this must be really, really tough victoria; yours is splendid, i loved the vague pictures it created in mind.
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This is brilliant, Victoria. What fun! I may very well try it. Perfect exercise for the rainy day we have here today. The result is quite amazing.
Poem on …
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I had to try, Victoria. There’s a note for you attached to my poem. I think I made it harder on myself because I decided to just open the dictionary to each letter and whatever page it opened to, I looked for my word on those pages. Just for fun! What was I thinking?
http://bodhirose.wordpress.com/2010/12/05/xizang/
Your poem is very powerful.
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