One of my favorite books about the art of writing poetry is “The Poet’s Companion–A Guide to the Pleasures of Writing Poetry” by Kim Addonizio and Dorianne Laux, both inspiring poets who, I believe, are from the San Francisco Bay Area.
In one of the chapters they discuss the art of writing eroticism. For those who find this challenging, they provide several suggestions that include using non-erotic imagery, metaphor and simile to suggest the erotic and they provide examples using the natural world, including landscape, to create sexual images.
For today’s exercise, I would like to challenge you to write an erotic poem or flash fiction about the landscape or any non-sexual activity such as cleaning house, driving a car…whatever. Please consider sharing it by posting a link in comments.
Here is a poem I wrote a number of years ago. It was published in the Tahoe Writers’ Association Literary Journal: Edge.
Today Should Be Autumn
Today should be autumn with its
skies like cornflowers or my lover’s eyes.
Angels toss pillows and
romp in mounds of feathers.
Wind sends leaves scurrying,
hurled about like stars at the moment of creation.
Woodstoves waft incense,
delight spirits who dance in naked branches.
Stagnant rainwater stands in a rusty bucket;
the layer of slime floats on its surface, smells rank.
A slug inches its way across bricks
spattered with specks of moss.
Underneath a pile of mulch
bulbs shoot out nipples of willow green leaves
aroused by a lick of sunshine.
Earth, wet and waiting, opens to receive spring.
Lovely poem. Have you taken some down?
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You’ve accessed some really old posts, Jamie. Make me want to write prompts again. Perhaps. Time is my greatest challenge, it seems.
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Understandable. We all face that challenge, huh? Everyday and existentially.
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[…] reposting it is because it fits one of Victoria’s recent writing prompts, which you can read HERE. I thought since romantic poems certainly are among the most popular, there might be others who […]
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Fine poem. Sweetly sensual. I think I’ve written one that might fit your prompt … it’s from awhile back:
http://musingbymoonlight.com/2010/09/23/god-put-us-here-for-this/
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It’s wonderful. I hope others stop by to read it. Someday I’ll figure out the McLinky thing…maybe. :0)
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here’s my poem hope its not too erotic…
Naked trees..
One thing I’ll miss, once winter splits
is the bare and naked trees..
For spring has waited, patiently
to dress them up in leaves.
I love to see the shadow of
their trunks against a sunset sky…
(Naked trees are sexy things
but for what i don’t know why…)
I love their branches laced in snow
up against a sky of blue…
I love them dressed up in ice
with a bright sun shining through..
Once there dressed, I must confess
they don’t do a thing for me
though i do love the spring time buds
that change the scenery..
I love them best, when their dressed
In the beauty Autumn brings..
Still, Naked trees, are defiantly
one of my favorite things…
I know that lots of you will say
“she’s talking about a frigging tree.”.
But do one thing,for me this spring
check out a naked pregnant tree
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That’s great. Love the idea of a naked pregnant tree! I too love the barreness of winter–the way the sun shines through the branches and the sillhouttes of small birds. Thanks for contributing to this post, Connetta. Hope to see more of you soon. One of these days if my old brain can figure out how to to McLinky, I hope to open the Monday Morning Prompt up to more participation. Be happy!
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very vividly written. beautiful piece.
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nice imagery…the eroticism was lost on me in the sludge rising but maybe that is personal preference…did this last sunday with a sunset…nice challenge…
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No, you’re right. The whole poem was not meant to be erotic. Probably should have qualified that.
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lovely poem…
Happy Sunday!
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Victoria, this is so delightfully sensuous and suggestive. It is a treat to be given such tasteful bits to build at our own discretion!
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