SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge–Anger


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Submitted to SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/p/haiku-challenge.html

Anger

justified anger
she was only a small child
innocence defiled.

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8 thoughts on “SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge–Anger

  1. Someone is Special says:

    innocence defiled? you captured it so well Victoria.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  2. OH… innocence defiled. Breaks my heart that little children are yanked out of innocence often way too early. nice haiku.

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  3. Bodhirose says:

    Poor children at the hands of such cruelty and mistreatment. You caught the essence of this, Victoria.

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  4. trisha says:

    beautifull said victoria. anger is very often justified , its just a burning coal thats another issue.

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  5. dancingfreak says:

    lovely 🙂

    perceived through the eyes of a child!! 😀

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  6. otterblossom says:

    such deep feeling in such a concise form

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  7. Tears. This went straight to the heart. Few words make for a stronger sentiment. Nice work. Perfect subject for Haiku.

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  8. cloakedmonk says:

    Oh. My. Gosh. Yes. Justifiable. And you captured it in so few words.

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