SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge–Regret


Submitted to SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/p/haiku-challenge.html

Regret

I wish I hadn’t–
I believed his words of love
now I am alone.

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12 thoughts on “SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge–Regret

  1. angelagenie says:

    Brillant.
    Says it all in so few words.

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  2. Someone is Special says:

    romantic Victoria.. Awesome..

    Someone is Special

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  3. iblogmoore says:

    so romantically sad well done!

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  4. honeyhaiku says:

    Ah, something I think we have all experienced. Captured simply but beautifully.

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  5. Artswebshow says:

    Excellent haiku, that artwork is really good too.
    Good theme to use.

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  6. Wonderful, a companion piece to my Empty.

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  7. sarah says:

    repentance is a killer emotion…and is crafted in this image..amazing take on the prompt..touching!

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  8. Mike Patrick says:

    Beautiful, Liv. It reminds me of the sentiment in an old poem, except you did it in seventeen syllables. If you ever have the time, take a look. http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/2011/01/20/butterfly/

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  9. Becca Givens says:

    I was looking forward to your take … Thank you!

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  10. trisha says:

    you perfectly captured the immense pain of that cruel betrayal. nothing hurts more than that i believe.

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  11. Bodhirose says:

    A very lonely time indeed… You captured it just right.

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