SiS’ Daily Haiku Challenge–Debris


Palm trees in the early evening

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Submitted to SiS’ Daily Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com  Today’s theme is Debris

Debris

A flock of dead ducks?
Palm bark scattered on the green
a victim of the wind.

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18 thoughts on “SiS’ Daily Haiku Challenge–Debris

  1. Have you been in our front courtyard?

    Lovely, Victoria!

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  2. Olivia says:

    utterly barren- imaginative n intense.. 🙂
    a great one again xx

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  3. sad but beautiful Haiku..

    Someone is Special

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  4. sonsy lass says:

    shocking, beautiful, sad – lovely progression of different moods with each line

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  5. cloakedmonk says:

    Very nice. Up here, it is the debris of pine trees, but all else is the same. Good universality.

    Shalom,
    http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/19/children/

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  6. ladynimue says:

    ah ! some debris makes beauty ..

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  7. sarah says:

    aww..thts painful!
    but u used the prompt very very elegantly and wonderfully!
    perfect one 🙂

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  8. trisha says:

    beautiful beachscape victoria, just loved it, you painted the scene with your words.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/debris/

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  9. Clever to begin with a question, and even more so to have an unexpected answer. Well done.

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  10. Nanka says:

    We have a lot of palm trees around and sure we get to see this kind of debris regularly.

    LOL! Sometimes, we hear the debris fall in the middle of the night and it makes you jump out of your skin!

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  11. Mike Patrick says:

    The wind’s aftermath comes in many shapes. Descriptive haiku.

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  12. vivinfrance says:

    The sound of wind among palm trees is an amazing clatter. Now I know why!

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  13. Jingle says:

    beautiful Haiku,
    the imagery is perfect.

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  14. reminds me of storms, florida, nicely captured 🙂

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  15. L.L. Barkat says:

    I should make myself do haiku. Such focus. Yours satisfied.

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  16. Bodhirose says:

    Glad they weren’t dead ducks! A great haiku, Victoria.

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  17. Chloe says:

    Stunning words – I love Haiku and this one is great! Thanks xx

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