Submitted to One Shot Wednesday: http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/03/one-shot-poetry-wednesday-week-39.html
Early Spring
A Haiku
This morning’s sweater,
abandoned by the window,
soaks up warm rays.
Submitted to One Shot Wednesday: http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/03/one-shot-poetry-wednesday-week-39.html
Early Spring
A Haiku
This morning’s sweater,
abandoned by the window,
soaks up warm rays.
this is perfect “spring”! 🙂
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Love the morning sweater.
Delightful haiku!
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A wonderful Haiku with awesome imagery. Thank you xx
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Lovely haiku. Captures the moment beautifully!
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this leaves a comfortable and warm feeling in my stomach…you create such a mood with such few words victoria
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Very effective imagery ! liked this 🙂
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I love haiku…the way the capture a moment like a camera but with so much more. Loved the picture too.
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Simply beautiful! Both verse and photo. I join you in looking forward to spring– although I am flying there from summer-like autumn today.
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Summer girl here, loves to leave them all sweaters by the window :). Lovely emotions this haiku evokes Victoria, at least to me …!
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I rarely see a sweater so evocative.
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Thank you…a day brightener. Siggi in Maine
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nice….love the shedding season…smiles.
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I finally got to abandon mine today and mow the lawn…such blessings in a sweater and the sun…bkm
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Sure sign warm weather is on the way when you can shed your sweater by midday! I love this!
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Nice, Victoria. This one just speaks of life as we live it. Blessings…
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Lovely, Victoria! I could feel the warmth, though it’s cloudy and cool here…
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I really like this new site, Victoria. Plus, your haiku gave me waves of delight. I can see my red sweater casually sleeping in the sunlight. I can feel the conflict between the desire to feel its familiarity and the joy of not needing it.
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