Mad Kane’s Limerick Challenge

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A girl who seemed guileless and sweet
on an evening of simmering heat
declared “Life’s a bore;
“there’s just got to be more.”
Now you’ll find her out working the street.

For a bit of levity in the midst of sometimes angst-driven poetry check out Mad Kane’s Blog. It’s so fun!


14 thoughts on “Mad Kane’s Limerick Challenge

  1. ladynimue says:

    This was wow !!


  2. Chloe says:

    A great limerick with a heart-rendering ending. I feel sorry for girls who feel they have no choice but to opt for this lifestyle xx


  3. meirozavian says:

    I hope she’ll find a better job and getting more and more.

    Nice piece.


  4. Jingle says:

    superb job…………

    keep it up.


  5. Life’s a bore … it is sometimes, but that more it’s better to search not on the streets! Sad for that girl …


  6. Jamie Dedes says:

    Bravo! Smiles and laughter. This is clever, Victoria, and did love Gayle’s take on it as well. Nicely challenge.


  7. Thanks so much for your fun limerick and for participating in my latest Limerick-Off! I’ll hope you’ll become a “regular” at my weekly limerick challenges every Sunday or Monday. And thanks so much for your kind words about my humor blog!


  8. trisha says:

    beautifully crafted victoria. limerick is a style i will always enjoy but most probably will never be able to write.

    i cant even make head or leg of its rules 🙂


  9. souldipper says:

    Is it a coincidence that your limerick addressing this profession contains those rhyming words “bore” and” more”? 😀

    I really, really enjoy limericks.


  10. Bodhirose says:

    I couldn’t resist, Victoria. I loved your limerick and have always wanted to try one. So here it is:

    I posted it to Mad Kane’s Limerick Challenge too. They sure are fun to read!


  11. Nice one…yet it says a lot about night life.


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