Wordsmith Wednesday–Some More Thoughts about Description

Allegory of the Five Senses

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The more I read, the more I realize the critical role of description–involving all the senses–in the telling of a story. It is through sensory input that we engage in our world. So many of us today rush through life. Always in a hurry, we don’t take the time to notice the beauty of cloud formations, the scent of honey-suckle, the colors of the sunset or the caress of a summer breeze. Sucked into the vortex of Ipods, texting–even blogs–it’s easy to succumb to the inevitability of a life lived vicariously. So, offer your reader the joys he or she may be missing. Invite them to become more aware. This goes whether you write fiction, poetry, creative non-fiction or…you name it.

Here are a few more considerations to bear in mind when writing description:

  • Good description does not have to be flowery, purple prose kind of stuff. Avoid extensive use of hyperbole, adjectives, adverbs. Go for active verbs when you can.
  • Description isn’t only about what you see. Train yourself to become aware of all your senses. Keep notes about your experiences in your writing journal so that you can refer to them for inspiration.
  • Use description to express emotion. It’s that old “show, don’t tell” advice. Become aware of how your body responds when you’re happy, afraid–whatever. Go ahead and jot that down in your journal, too.
  • Don’t be afraid to describe the ugly, the scary, the difficult, the gruesome, even. This is all part of life, isn’t it?
  • Description doesn’t have to be lengthy, rambling. Tighten up your narrative, but make every word count. I’m sure that when reading you, like me, have been guilty of skimming lengthy paragraphs of description that have taken you out of the story line.
  • When writing short fiction, limit description to those things that will contribute to the story line.

Suggestion: to develop your own awareness, get in the habit of journaling each day. Jot down some memories of things you’ve observed. Go beyond the visual. Cultivate awareness.

If you haven’t written anything for this weeks Monday Morning Writing Prompt, I hope you’ll join us. Maybe some of these suggestions will help you.

Reminder–I will be off-line for a few days beginning tomorrow and will do my best to catch up when I get home. With luck, I’ll be able to do my part for MMWP!

(The image is entitled The Allegory of the Five Senses.)

6 thoughts on “Wordsmith Wednesday–Some More Thoughts about Description

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  2. Jamie Dedes says:

    Good work.

    Love the painting.

    Thanks for posting all.



  3. I very often pay attention much more to the small details, even when I read poetry or stories, the small and not so important at first sight things are that get my attention, of course you are right, to make the reader catch them …practice and perfection as much possible …


  4. Bodhirose says:

    Very good advice and guidance here. Thank you, Victoria.


  5. Safe trip–and thanks for this. I’m saving all your advice into a ‘Writing How-Tos’ file and I go and read them when I need input.


  6. trisha says:

    thanks a lot victoria, i am working hard on this part. very hard.

    i sometimes feel that i have gone overboard with descriptions 😦


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