thirteen ways of looking at rain
i
rain
symbol of cleansing
dreamtime confession
ii
the touch of rain
on a withered cheek
reminder of long-ago kisses
iii
when rain and sun
make love
they spawn rainbows
iv
rain puddles on asphalt or cobblestone
luminescent pools of color
moody reflections
v
rain puddles on dirt make mud
child’s delight
mother’s misery
vi
when rain freezes
and winds blow
kisses sting
like a lover grown cold
vii
some people are like rain
you reach out to touch them
they slip through your fingers
they are gone
but you remember
they were there
viii
some people are like rain
you wait for them
but they don’t come
then they appear uninvited
and disrupt your life
ix
mingle rain
with tears
purify your heart
x
rain’s caress
on a child’s cheek
an invitation to play
xi
too much rain blinds
just like too much of anything
moderation, balance
give direction
xii
dance in the rain
sing in the shower
be not afraid
enjoy freedom
xiii
when it rains
go walking
without an umbrella
This week at dVerse Poetics, the incomparable Brian Miller offers a prompt based on the amazing art work of Tera Zajack ( olive hue designs) and the Gooseberry Garden invites us to consider, among other things, December. Usually, this month is blessed with some form of precipitation. Where I live, it most often takes the form of snow. But this year, the only thing we’ve had is cold and wind. So this poem, inspired by a form given to us by Wallace Stevens, is more of a wish than a reality. I hope to see you at one or both of these wonderful poetry communities.
My browser would not allow me to upload the images that inspired this poem, so now you HAVE TO check out the Pub. Have a drink and share a poem while you’re there!
I have one of my own and this is how I look at rain
Liquid peace
calming the world
only for awhile
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13 ways looking at rain,
rich and inspiring share.
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Thank you, Ji. I will be around…especially for the rally or picnics, as soon as my back eases up a bit.
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I so want to write one of these “13 things”. I just love this and remember the other one you did previously. They’re so clever. Thanks for entertaining me, Victoria.
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Thirteen little treasures!
Anna :o]
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You make me miss the rain puddles of mother’s misery…
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beautiful, Victoria! ♥ i especially love ii and vii ~ but all of them are wonderful! happy holidays!
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Lovely. I really love the Wallace Stevens too. You do a great job. K.
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The verse about rain combining with other elements to make other things (rainbows, ice on your face)–those are the ones I like best, though all are wonderful. I love to watch rain and feel a warm rain on me. Not a cold one, but a warm one.
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Rain and I – a love/hate relationship. Your piece captures rain’s various aspects beautifully. 🙂
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it seems like you have written this for JP potluck …
glad to see you share.
very interesting ways to look at the rain.
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neat, well done.
elegant imagery.
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Wonderful words about one of natures most precious gifts!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
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“rain puddles on dirt make mud
child’s delight
mother’s misery”
Ha! Indeed. 🙂
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You stretch the meaning of ‘rain’ into so many dimensions, and do it with such apparent ease. It’s a great mental exercise for the reader to consider these distinctions, descriptions and differences all in one place. I enjoyed this.
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Each one is unique and yet so simple… I love them all!
You really have a lovely way with words, Victoria.
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Clever concept. All lovely but 7 and 9 are very special.
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You have made us all
appreciate much more
the rain’s preciousness.
Larry
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beautiful and quite different – I like the last verse especially, a lesson in life about not being too prepared! Well done.
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Beautiful work.
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You used this form once before. I enjoyed it very much than and enjoy this one as well … especially because it’s about rain, which I love.
Nice! Thanks, Victoria.
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A fabulous version of thirteen ways of looking at– xxxj
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This is precious, and very true, magikal indeed… Love all of this… Thank you and much appreciated… Happy Holidays, WS…
P.S. Answer to your question about my poem The 13th Turtle Shall Be Peace is yes….
13 rains 13 turtles, 🙂
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I love these different takes. This one is my favorite:
iii
when rain and sun
make love
they spawn rainbows
I see happy little baby rainbows running all over the place! 🙂
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Tera, thanks for taking the time to comment and for sharing your incredible talent with us.
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Very nice verses. I like the ones comparing rain to people, of the “child’s delight, mother’s misery” and the rainbow.
I do find the rain purifying. I don’t like grey days but I do enjoy rainy ones.
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i like your little list. just the other day, my mother gave her rain speech telling us how when people complain about the rain…she gives a list of all the advantages
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Marvelous piece!
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Lovely, Victoria. My husband loves the rain…I love dancing in the rain 🙂
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Victoria…how creative…the title drew me in, your words kept me on the page.
Thank you,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
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Cl ever girl, My ways to consider rain mostly consider swearing and unwieldy umbrellas. My favourits of these little gems is number 3.
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nice….love it victoria…love the rain…i like that the rain and sun make love and birth rainbows…cool way of putting that…and i like the first as well….nice
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gorgeous victoria..love them all..tried to pick a favorite…maybe it’s the one with the rain on child’s cheek or when rain and sun make love they spawn rainbows.. or the one with the mud..you see, i’m undecided..smiles
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