Two Haiku, two kinds of waves:

Trying to Forget
A Haiku

Waves sweep onto shore,
grasp my memories and flee,
drag them to the depths.


Home from War
A Haiku

The child stood waving.
Who is this man called daddy?
Why is he crying?


4 thoughts on “Forgotten

  1. ManicDdaily says:

    Hi Victoria–I like both of these Haiku–but found the one about the man called Daddy especially affecting. Agh. I hate war. Thanks. k.


  2. Mary says:

    Poignant…very poignant.


  3. rmp says:

    I wouldn’t mind the waves easing away some of my memories.

    the second piece is very touching.


  4. brian miller says:

    the second is a bit heart breaking…
    but i am glad he is one of the ones
    that made it home

    the good thing about the ocean
    is that what it takes it will turn back
    up eventually…somewhere.


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