Dark Night
Awake ,
I listen to the soughing
of breezes
in palms,
the hooting of
a distant owl.
Midnight blue seeps
into the room,
into the womb
of my loneliness.
I listen to silence,
to your absence,
lulled,
into sleep
by the soughing
of wind.
You’re invited to join us at dVerse Poets where we are invited to write a quadrille, a poem of exactly 44 words, using the word “Lull.”
Such an elegy.mi can hear the owl and the sadness.
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Soughing Wind.. lonely
trees of Winter
dreams..
snow so white
soul so dark..
liGht so BriGht
reflecting..
ice
melts
slowly back..:)
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Such a melancholy mood this invokes…your middle stanza sings a beautifully sad song!
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What a gorgeous photo, and a lulling piece (peace) to match. Wonderful, Victoria.
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You capture so well an atmosphere full of ache .. midnight blue seeps into the room .. very evocative
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What a believable atmosphere you have created with this poem.
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a kind of calm sadness is felt here. So lovely!
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This has a tidal movement to it that I really love. Nicely done.
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love this breezy hand of ‘dark night’ lulling the speaker into restful slumber…
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The calm of this belies the loneliness aspect.
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The soughing wind and the owl add to the lonely feeling here. I didn’t know that word “soughing” either.
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One of my favorite sounds is of the wind blowing, when all else is quiet. This reminds me of this so much! Wonderful!
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Beautiful. Not being lazy but just don’t know what else to say. Just beautiful.
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Eloquent!
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Yes, kudos for sending us all on a word search. Your second stanza is killer, as noted by others. Interesting how many of us delivered strong dramatic messages, not jumping the limerick shark.
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The silence of absence can lull oneself into a sleep of innocence. Very true Victoria!
Hank
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Beautifully wistful.
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“Midnight blue seeps
into the room,
into the womb
of my loneliness.”
Stunning words.
“Soughing” is new to me also 🙂
Listening to your loved one’s absence….I was almost put into this situation (my piece addresses this situation)….I cannot imagine the loneliness of lying without my loved one. You’ve described this emotion so very very poignantly.
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Beautiful dark night with sloughing of wind & womb of loneliness ~ Lovely 44 word painting of the night Victoria ~
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There is the loneliness and the absence, but still the idea of being lulled to sleep by the soughing of breezes sounds very peaceful to me.
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“the womb
of my loneliness.” Such longing in that wind.
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Soughing – sounds like sighing which is so much in that tone, in the absence in your words.. Like you said – a whole story in 44 words. Beautiful
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your owl adds a mournful sound to this – it’s worthy of reading over and over.
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Beautiful and sadly sweet. And I learned a new word: soughing. I always love learning a new word via a dVerse poem. Peace, Linda
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