The Twist–a Quadrille


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The Twist

You are responsible for your rose.
Antoine de St-Exupery
The Little Prince

True, no doubt.
Accepting love
we open arms to joy.

But here’s the twist:

There is no joy
without the care
that comes with pain.

Outside,
a mother duck plays lame.
Perhaps she sees the hawk.
Love asks for all
we have to give.

Linked to dVerse Quadrille–a poem of exactly 44 words, using the word twist. I was tempted to write of the time David and I succumbed to the call of that dance from our youth, of his subsequent back surgery and…well, I won’t go into it. Had this been the Haibun, perhaps I would have.

Oh, and if you’ve never read “The Little Prince,” you must. Read it in French if you are able.

 

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29 thoughts on “The Twist–a Quadrille

  1. Bekkie says:

    Oh I hope the hawk missed her this time! Life is just like that.

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  2. Truedessa says:

    The Little Prince one of my favorites. The twist speaks with a tongue of truth…

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  3. I read the book ages ago. An interesting article (don’t remember which publication) tells of Antoine de St-Exupery caught in a hurricane/tornado while flying an aeroplane, during the war I think. I always wondered whether his gratefulness in surviving produced The Little Prince?

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  4. othermary says:

    In just a few words you’ve got a world of truth. This is a special one, Victoria. xx

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  5. Patti says:

    I love The Little Prince. You’ve captured beautifully one of the many bits of wisdom it has to offer.

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  6. The joy, pain and sacrifices for love….it certainly does not come easy. Now I must read “Le Petit Prince”, perhaps taking the challenge en francais! 🙂

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  7. Bryan Ens says:

    “Perhaps she sees the hawk.” That is sacrificial love.

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  8. Alas, it is 10.15 am. J’ai passé le matin en lecture, grace à toi! Le Petit Prince m’a apprivoisée et m’enchantée.

    And now I must get dressed! Thank you for the delighful steer.

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  9. Sumana Roy says:

    love needs so much strength and forbearance and is not without pain…beautiful…

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  10. kanzensakura says:

    Love asks for all
    we have to give…. and more. So true. I have always loved this story and this poem of yours says it all. You have written of the ducks before in your yard. I have seen parent animals fake to lead predators away from their young so many times and how they put all of themselves out there – for love. This made me cry thinking of my parents and their love.

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  11. She says:

    “There is no joy
    without the care
    that comes with pain.”

    Man, that is so true.

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  12. Lovely poem in 44 words.

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  13. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    It’s long been one of my favourite books too, and I too cherish my very old copy (in English; I can’t read French well enough). The quadrille is perfect.

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  14. mtw says:

    oh love, this was such a beautiful poem. i love how you incorporate the little prince (a heartwrenching masterpiece) as well as the example of a mother duck. in only forty-four words, you manage to break my heart. well done.

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  15. Grace says:

    One of my favorite story Victoria ~ So many lessons to learn and appreciate ~ Goodness, you must tell the story of you and your hubby dancing one time to the twist 🙂

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  16. lillian says:

    Wonderful 44 words. The many sides of love. I’m reminded of the Giving Tree.

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  17. ZQ says:

    Whoa… the ultimate act of love.

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  18. Love asked for all we have to give indeed. You’ve managed to fit a lot in just 44 words. Wonderful writing.

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  19. whimsygizmo says:

    “Love asks for all
    we have to give.”

    YES. So well done, Victoria. I bet you can tell your twist dancing story in 44 words, even haibun style. 🙂

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  20. Oh I have never read that book… but yes I’m with you on that twist… there is pain in real love, it’s sacrifice and loss… love the image of mother duck too….

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  21. I love this! “Le Petit Prince” was one of my favorites in my college French class. I still have my copy, though my French is beyond rusty I just can’t part with it. And you’ve expressed such an important truth about real love — it’s not for sissies.

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