Arise
Blurred colors—rainbows bouncing
in prismatic waterdrops on palm fronds.
Think of oft-overlooked miracles.
Life wants to drink slowly, savor
the moment-to-moment unfolding of a flower,
the hatching, fledging, soaring of an eagle,
(of thoughts) heavenward, lifting
our world a step closer to joy.
Please join us for the Quadrille, a poem of exactly 44 words sans title, at dVerse Poets. De is asking us to use the word BOUNCE this week.
“Life wants to drink slowly, savor
the moment-to-moment unfolding of a flower”
Oh, wow. That is so beautiful.
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Your words here are so uplifting. Thank you
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vivacious Victoria – such animism in your poem
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Love that ….. we seemed to have been on the same wavelength as well 🙂
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This is a gorgeous and uplifting poem. The following lines speak to me.
Life wants to drink slowly, savor
the moment-to-moment
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Joyful and vivid!
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You phrased it well… savor those moments that don’t come internet-fast, but require reflection… or, in this case, refraction.
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Well, well, I never thought of rainbows bouncing, but that is perhaps precisely what that arch shows they can do!
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A celebration of the beauty around us. Well said!
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I like those thoughts compared to fledglings and the joy they bring.
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This is so incredibly gorgeous Victoria ☺️ Love the image of rainbows bouncing in prismatic waterdrops.. *swooon*❤️
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Life does indeed want to drink slowly. Fabulous line!
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Such a beautiful reminder to savor the moment by writing a beautiful poem of such moments and what we’re missing when we miss them.
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Brilliant Imagery, Victoria!
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I love the lifting up in this poem. Glorious.
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Beautiful imagery.
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I love the joy in the small miracles and ‘rainbows bouncing
in prismatic waterdrops’ – a beautiful write Victoria xxx
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Love your rainbows bouncing in water droplets! Life wants to absorb, but all we do is bounce from one thing to another, never at rest!
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Lifting our world a step closer to joy….those everyday miracles. Such a lovely poem and so full of beautiful thoughts.
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Gorgeous imagery of rainbows bouncing in raindrops and I love the lines:
‘…savor
the moment-to-moment unfolding of a flower,
the hatching, fledging, soaring of an eagle’.
Spring is just around the corner!
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Ohhhh, THIS:
“Life wants to drink slowly, savor
the moment-to-moment unfolding of a flower”
YES. So beautiful, Victoria. I am hoping to SLOW this year. So much. Even as I bounce. 😉
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I would so much love those small miracles of flowers opening… just the thought of rainbows bouncing make me long for spring….
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There are many “oft-overlooked miracles”. I keep missing them and thankfully they keep re-appearing.
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