I Am–dVerse OLN, a Quadrille


I penned this too late for De’s Quadrille prompt last week, so here it is for OLN using the word WINK. Sorry I’ve been absent so long. My husband was away for seven weeks to oversee work in Palm Desert and left his huge garden responsibilities to me! Not to mention our spoiled dogs.

Image: CC0 Public Domain

I Am
a Quadrille

I am a periwinkle sky in May,
obsidian roiling sea when winter
winks at weakening boundaries.
And when summer evening
breezes kiss the dusk, there you will
find me waiting ‘neath the
sheltering green of maples.
Watch carefully and you will see.

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19 thoughts on “I Am–dVerse OLN, a Quadrille

  1. The last line, such a promise. Lovely.

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  2. Lona Gynt says:

    I also loved the periwinkle sky, and all 44 words, and specially this:

    “And when summer evening
    breezes kiss the dusk, there you will
    find me waiting ‘neath the
    sheltering green of maples.”

    Next time your sweetie has to leave town send him those lines and he will want to hurry back sooner, and then you get to get im back in the garden 😉

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  3. therisa says:

    Sigh. On such a wintery day, to read your words, Victoria, provides hope, in a few short months, it’ll be spring, again. Replacing the blah grey skies with colour to dazzle one’s eyes. Am hoping for a short winter, in southern Ontario. Well, one dream. 🙂

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  4. Grace says:

    I can’t wait for that. Love your color of periwinkle sky in May, Victoria. I hope you are well despite the hectic garden chores and dog cares.

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  5. Glenn Buttkus says:

    Love me some periwinkle skies. So nice to see and read you. Life can be demanding. I’ve got a new BLACKTHORNE up.

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  6. sanaarizvi says:

    Oh this is absolutely breathtaking in its color and imagery, Victoria 😍😍

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  7. I think this is called ‘ gardening leave’ wink wink 😉

    you have covered the seasons in colour but I especially like
    “winter
    winks at weakening boundaries.”

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  8. Rob Kistner says:

    This was wonderful Victoria. There you will be “waiting neath the sheltering green”. Nice write… 🙂

    …rob from Image & Verse
    Lost in Azure

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  9. kim881 says:

    Wonderful use of colour, Victoria, and I love the thought of winter winking weakening boundaries’ and summer evening breezes kissing the dusk.

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  10. Ah, such beautiful colors here — this makes it so vivid and calming in its perspective and feel. 🙂

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  11. I do love how you have used the near opposites of periwinkle and obsidian… love the whole image

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  12. Lovely ~ I was seeing lots of shades of blue ~ a sense of peace.

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  13. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like that last line about watching carefully in order to see.

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  14. V.J. Knutson says:

    How deliciously whimsical.

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  15. rosross says:

    Music of the spheres in this. Nicely done.

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  16. rothpoetry says:

    When winter winks weakening boundries…. Very nice… It does play with us for sure! I hope the maples were not referring to your demise!?

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  17. Such beautiful words in this piece. Thanks for sharing.

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