lust–dVerse Quadrille
lust
my thoughts stream in
and out like water—
free, cascading,
life-sustaining. I dance in droplets
(a creative thrust) such
love-making in a pool
of misty water-want
thirst for more and more
until, satiated, I paint
in words or water-color
swirling about to mix beauty.
It has been so long since I’ve posted or even written a poem. Though I’m still in a caregiver mode, I caught Dee’s Quadrille post and felt compelled to write to it. WordPress has me confused. Since it’s been such a long time, they are treating me as a new user and I couldn’t find my post to edit. It’s good to be here, to hang around with old friends and meet some new ones.
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Victoria,
I deeply enjoyed the movement and color and energy here, thirst slaked through creativity. Wonderfully expressive.
pax,
dora
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I haven’t written much poetry this year, Dora, as I’m a caregiver now. This wasn’t for the soliloquy prompt!
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A lust for creativity is the best kind!
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Great to see you here, Victoria. Love your take on the prompt!
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Nice to see you, Victoria, and glad you were able to navigate through WP barriers to get your poem written, saved, and linked. I like the lust- moisture-movement aspects that work very well together in your poem.
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SMiLes Victoria So Nice to See Your Poetry
And Your Presence on WordPress again, Hehe
As Before i Wrote Poetry i Did Information
Technology Support Along with
Many Other
Hats Working
For the Government
The Link Below That Should
Be Private and Only For You
Should Take You Back to the
Classic Editing Page You are
Used to For the Button That
Says New Post Just
Click on the
Classic
Editor Option
And Voila You
Are Back Where
You Last Left-Off on Word Press…
It appears That WordPress is Attempting
to Make More Money By Making it Harder
to Write Longer Posts Yet Hehe There’s
Always A Work-Around Thank Goodness
As my Once 6,000 Word Poems Each
Week Are Now Averaging 60,000 Words
Bi-Weekly Just A Free Retirement Hobby
As my Long Form Poem “SonG oF mY SoUL”
Is at 9.5 MiLLioN Words in 95 Months along with
15,188 Miles of Public Dance in that Span of Months too…
True Information Tech Support
Was Really Easy As My Autistic
Tendencies Do Travel A Very
Limited Systemizing
Mind of
Life too
Oh Lord So Nice
To Break Out of the Computer Box…
Anyway This Worked for the Last Person
i Helped So it Should Work for you too my FRiEnD…
Basically it should work for anyone on Word Press
Just Put the Site Name Where i’ve Inserted Yours here
Per
“live2write2day” With SMiLes..:)
https://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/wp-admin/edit.php
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Thank you, Freddie. I am so grateful just to be here again and rediscover friends like you. I won’t be posting much because I am now a caregiver to my husband who is losing his vision due to an autoimmune disease. You are special in so many ways. I will use this but will try to learn the new format. It’s good for old people like I to keep learning. Smiles.
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SMiLes Dear Victoria From my Rise From REAL HeLL ON Earth
For 66 Months Shut-in With 19 Medical Disorders Including
the Worst Pain Known to Humankind Wake to Sleep No
Drug Would Touch, Type Two Trigeminal Neuralgia,
Yes Literally Assessed
As Worse than the
Torture of Crucifixion
No 3 Hour to 3 Day
Gilligan’s Island Tour
of Hell for me Full Bore
Hell For 66 Months on Earth…
Escaping that Place Barely Human
Returning to HumanKind Your Acceptance
of me As Human Being With A Handful of Others
Including Brian on ‘dVerse’ Was Instrumental in my
Full Recovery In Finally Losing The Restraints of
Culture And Become All of Who i Am my FRiEnD
Just to Spread The Energy of Who i am At Core
For What i Believe Are the Human Potentials
The Colors of Ever Green Christmas
Trees That May Be
Created As
New Colors ACross
A Lifespan And Never
Taken Down in a Place
of Being and Doing Love More Than
Only One Day of the Year my FRiEnD…
Your Husband is Very Lucky to Have a
Caregiver Like You In His Age of Need…
As i Was Much Younger With A Wife Without
Food or Drink At 8 Years-old Who Had No Choice
Yet to Become Wonder Woman Climbing 40 Foot
Trees Looking Over the Roof of the Have’s Who
Cared Not For the
Have Not’s
To Pick
Fruit
to Eat…
The Same
First Baptist
Christians Who Spit
On Her in the School Lunch
Line The Same Ones Who Spit
on me Just for the Sin of Being A Boy who
Smiles The Hardest Part of Being a Christian
My FRiEnD Is Forgiving Christians Yet i Never Give
Up As Rainbows Do Still Now Coming Out of Hurricane Dark…
The Center Eye is Heaven Is Balance Belying All the Storm
Winds
Still Coming
As Equalizer of
Ocean Heat my FRiEnD
i Do Believe the Next one
On the List is Named Fred…
‘Elsa The Ice Princess Storm’
Already had Her turn…
In Other Words
Thanks my FRiEnD
SMiLes God (Love) Blesses You For Real..:)
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Victoria- It’s so good to read your words again. This is lovely.
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A lovely quadrille … The sensuousness seeps through every line.
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Victoria – this is such a unique take – I’m glad to have had the opportunity to read your work 🙂
Yours,
David
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Well done.
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What a delight to read your poetry again, Victoria.
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wonderful movement in this poem Victoria – like the swirl of paint in a water jar
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Water is the primal element. You captured its meaning beautifully. I hope you give yourself time to write. It only needs a few minutes of quiet. Takes hours though to wrangle WP sometimes!
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Your post popped up in my Reader, Victoria, and what a great poem……I haven’t written any poetry for nearly 6 years, I think…..one day I must try again.
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You are so talented!!! See you Friday?
On Mon, Jul 26, 2021, 13:38 Victoria C. Slotto, Author wrote:
> Victoria C. Slotto posted: ” lustmy thoughts stream inand out like > water—free, cascading,life-sustaining. I dance in droplets(a creative > thrust) suchlove-making in a poolof misty water-wantthirst for more and > moreuntil, satiated, I paintin words or water-colorswirling about to mix b” >
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This is incredibly EXQUISITE, Victoria 😍 My goodness where do I begin? The poem is so subtly seductive, I especially admire “such love-making in a pool of misty water-want.”
I have missed you! What a comeback poem!!💝💝
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Welcome back, Victoria, Ma’am. Sure is fun to read your first upon your return, edited or otherwise!
Hank
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So good to see you, Victoria! The new WordPress nonsense still just about kills me, every post! There is longing here, in these streams. Wonderful.
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Yes, Creativity is like that! love the water-color of words…
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Hi, Patricia. It’s been a long, long time since I have posted as I have now become a caregiver to my husband who has had 2 back surgeries this year but, more significantly is losing his vision. I’m not writing at all though feeling the push to returned to a book of Gospel meditations I began a couple of years ago. I must check out your new blog. Tickles my writing lust.
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Victoria, I have missed you, and you have missed many episodes of BLACKTHORNE. Just seeing your name to click on made my heart skip a beat. Brian & Claudia were just here recently. Loved your quadrille. Hope you are finding an iota of joy each day.
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Love seeing you, too, Glenn. I’ve missed having time for poem-ing and sharing with good friends. I’ll be over to see your poem in a minute.
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Good to see you again. You haven’t lost your touch! I hope you find your way here more often again.
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Hi, Beverly. It’s good to be here–I look forward to reading your work in a few. Be well.
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Lovely words deep from the heart. I can feel your emotions and struggle. I just looked you up last week, wondering what life has brought your way. I’m glad you’re still writing. I actually just popped in at dverse last week. Poetry is my first love, but now I’m drenched in fiction. Stop in on Wednesday’s for my new Christian Flash Fiction with a prompt from the Bible. I trust God is sustaining.
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I’m not able to write now as I’m in a caregiving mode. This was a fluke, my first poem in 2021. I’ve signed up to receive notification for your Christian Flash Fiction site. If I can figure out the new wordpress changes, maybe I can join in. At any rate, I can read…a few at least.
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I will pray. Caregivers are in a tough spot. I look forward to the day you have time to write again.
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