Mourning

Mourning Dove

Mourning Dove (Photo credit: mizmak)

Photo: David Slotto, all rights reserved.

Mourning

Alone beneath a velvet sky
silver sparks dance with sparrows,
crystal moons splinter.

Clay turtles melt
on an empty canvas
leaving tawny shadows
beside the hibiscus
that blooms
in velvet wonder.

A hummingbird descends,
drinks
perfumed blood and honey.
Blankets of feathers
stagger across its
silken breast.

Mourning doves
covet joy.

Ladles of honey
slip down
throats,
mask pain,
balance
the loss of
life’s rhythm.

Submitted to dVerse Poets’ Open Link Night and Write2Day.

Copyright 2012, Victoria C. Slotto, all rights reserved.

Dove Image: Creative Commons Non-Commercial Share-Alike

January in the Desert

Photo: David Slotto

 

January in the Desert

I am
a wild strawberry
woven among
low-lying oleander branches,

I am
the fear that brushes
by your body in
the darkness of a dream.

I am
cloud-fingers
slipping over
mounded slopes

of snow-capped
Santa Rosa mountains
bringing rain
and night.

I slap
the rounded curves of
wind-stroked cheeks
turned skyward.

I am the hummingbird.
I wait outside
your window
with promises of joy.

I’m linking this to dVerse Open Link Night and Write2Day, which I will post on Wednesday afternoon (4 PM PST). Be sure to stop by the pub to enjoy good friends, superb poetry and an on-going celebration of the new year. I’d love to see you here on Wednesday, too.

I wrote this last year during our stay in Palm Desert. My husband photographed this pure white (Leucistic) hummingbird that loved to visit our feeder and truly did bring us joy.

Write2Day–Finding the Muse

Hesiod and the Muse

Image via Wikipedia

A couple of weeks ago, I posted a poll, asking which day of the week would serve best for a post combining my on-going features about writing technique, trends and prompts (Monday Morning Writing Prompt and Wordsmith Wednesday). Wednesday afternoon to Thursday took top spot. Several of you told me to go with whatever works best for me, so there may be some variance from time-to-time.

In today’s ponderings, I’d like to explore a topic I’ll call, Finding the Muse. It’s a topic that’s been a recurrent visitor to my blog because, from time-to-time we (should I say I?) need a kick in the butt to jumpstart truly creative writing.

Quantity writing can be a symptom of a complusive disorder…especially if that writing lacks quality. There are times when we need to find balance between writing and not-writing, with the goal of using that downtime to nurture the muse. Writing is a priority in our lives, but it isn’t the whole story. To be a good writer, in my opinion, it’s important to do more than write. We need to conceive our work before taking up pen and paper, and we need to hone the work once it’s completed.

Here are a few outside-of-writing considerations to help produce quality poetry and/or prose:

  • Write what you know, but go out and learn something new so you have more to write about. Take a class, read, consult experts in other fields, learn a new hobby or skill, spend a day with someone on the job.
  • Meet and interview people who have a different take on life. Write from a point of view that differs from your own, read essays and op-ed pieces. Explore other religions.
  • Travel. If you can’t afford to take a trip, watch travelogues, jump on the Internet and go new places. The world can come to us through our monitors.
  • Read something from a different era or country. Pick up a book or watch a movie that packed full of adventures you’ll never experience in your own life situation. Do whatever you need to in order to get out of the confines of your day-to-day existence.
  • Take time to notice the details of life that is within your scope of living but that you tend to ignore. Observe the baristas at Starbucks. Watch the chefs in a diner or pizza joint. Take a field trip to a brewery, a manufacturing facility or warehouse.
  • Invite your imagination to go on a date with you. It doesn’t have to be expensive. Stay home and daydream.

For this week’s prompt, chose one of the above suggestions and write whatever came out of that experience. Write poetry or prose. Make a list. Share a journal entry. Whatever. If you’re stuck in the quagmire of writer’s block or mediocre writing (like I am) this may be just the Rx you need.

To join in:

  • Share the results on your blog.
  • Copy your URL, access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post. Share your name and paste your URL
  • Visit and comment on other blogger’s work.
  • Extend an invitation to one or more of your favorite blogger to join us.
  • Have fun.

The link will be open until a new Write2Day is posted.

Image: Hesiod and the Muse: Public Domain