Grandfather
He strides like a giant,
Ascends earth’s round cheek.
The child at his side runs to keep up,
scuffs the toe of pink sneakers.
Sweeping up the bundle,
he heaves her on sturdy shoulders,
like God would.
Canyons yawn before them.
Fields of wildflowers,
splattered with color,
sway at their passage,
bow in homage.
When they reach the apex,
grandfather lowers the girl
who gathers buds and
puts them in a Mason jar
half-filled with water.
She clasps tiny hands around
the grooved rim,
walks back down on her own.
A warped screen-door slams behind them.
The cool dark room envelopes the pair as
she slips the gift into her mother’s
chapped hands.
[…] During the subsequent years, we lived with my maternal grandparents and it was easy to call my grandfather Daddy as soon as I decided it was okay to talk. The man was a wonder, a civil engineer for the Los Angeles Flood Control, quiet, brilliant and loving. He sang baritone, and I remember sitting on his shoulders at Christmas Midnight Mass while he sang “Oh, Holy Night” to the accompaniment of my concert-pianist/organist grandmother. Come to think of it, I wrote of him, years ago, as well, here. […]
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[…] During the subsequent years, we lived with my maternal grandparents and it was easy to call my grandfather Daddy as soon as I decided it was okay to talk. The man was a wonder, a civil engineer for the Los Angeles Flood Control, quiet, brilliant and loving. He sang baritone, and I remember sitting on his shoulders at Christmas Midnight Mass while he sang “Oh, Holy Night” to the accompaniment of my concert-pianist/organist grandmother. Come to think of it, I wrote of him, years ago, as well, here. […]
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[…] During the subsequent years, we lived with my maternal grandparents and it was easy to call my grandfather Daddy as soon as I decided it was okay to talk. The man was a wonder, a civil engineer for the Los Angeles Flood Control, quiet, brilliant and loving. He sang baritone, and I remember sitting on his shoulders at Christmas Midnight Mass while he sang “Oh, Holy Night” to the accompaniment of my concert-pianist/organist grandmother. Come to think of it, I wrote of him, years ago, as well, here. […]
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I love the “like God would” aspect of his arms scooping her up – that’s such a child’s view of the thing, and so tender. :o) Here’s mine this week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/12/09/drafting-personal-census/
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Oh this is so lovely. What a tender expression of the giants in our lives as children. You tell us so much about your grandfather so subtly.
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lovely, I enjoy my grandparents company as well.
🙂
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It’s a good, strong poem.
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i love the images here. i can feel both sides of this, the child or the grandparent.
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This gets a WOW from me, Victoria! It is beautiful and so vivid, I felt as if I were watching a movie instead of reading a poem. An absolutely stunning piece!
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So sweet and touching, loved it Victoria!! Blessings, Terri
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awww a sweet day with grandpa, so much love in that one piece! nice work!
enjoy the gooseberry day!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/07/of-me/
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I like that you reposted this.. sweet memories of our grandparents I can relate to as well ~
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very sweet memories,
Victoria,
Thanks a lot for sharing.
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what a poem. just loved it victoria. the beautiful bonding of two.
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What a lovely time with grandfather–I think they all seemed like giants when we were little… Very sweet.
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Lovely, Victoria. I hope to write on this prompt Monday when one of my grandsons is coming over. I’m fortunate, all my grandchildren love to write.
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this is so beautiful victoria..wonder if it was you with your grandfather…a precious memory..
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Yes, it is. :0)
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What a lovely scene. Thank you! A fine, fine poem, Victoria.
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It is indeed lovely, beautiful depiction of a day’s joy.
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I still remember that feeling of being swept up onto my father’s shoulders. It was the best. Lovely piece 🙂
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I sank right into this loving scene, Victoria. It is full of life and wonder.
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Oh Thank you…for writing this lovely piece. After reading my own—downer themes..I loved and needed this.
love it
Jaye
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This is a lovely, you’ve captured these moments so well. I love “he heaves her on sturdy shoulders, like God would.” Gorgeous; thank you, enjoyed this!
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this is a beautiul piece victoria…the tenderness and awe between the grandfather and child and the desire to pick some flowers for mom…ah…
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A slice of life from the middle of the best chocolate cake. Great poem, Victoria. I enjoyed it. Blessings to you…
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What a beautiful piece, one I can relate to extremely well.
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