Back to the Future
were I to tell you of those years,
a canvas washed in yellow joy, the only
years in my lifetime
that we knew peace
you would believe me
delusional, a liar, just-plain-nuts
those years when crisis
meant sharing mom’s 55 buick
“The War of the Keys”
with a sis-
ter older than I by
7 months
or how she
ran with the popular kids
while I read Flaubert and
Greek trage-
dies (irae)
with other eggheads.
we’d fill the tank on
dad’s credit line
at twenty-
five cents a gallon
have groceries delivered
from Tipton’s meat market
by a pimple-faced kid
(I had the crush but
he wanted her)
yellow summer uniforms
and
wool plaid in California
cold—saddle oxfords
or white bucks, socks rolled
down and duck tails.
the fire escape,
the fire drills
that birthed our fear of heights
the school (building now condemned)
walk to the Copa
after school for cherry
cokes
and boys
from San Marino High.
now gas is $3.73 a gallon
here,
i’m still afraid of heights,
my hair is should be gray,
sun shines golden on the snow
and Cris is gone.
My widowed mom married a widower with a daughter my age in 1952 when we were 7 years old. To say our relationship was challenged is putting it mildly since we were in the same grade in the same school throughout. Thankfully, as adults, the competition evaporated and we were friends. Sadly, I lost Cris in 2004, age 61, to pancreatic cancer.
This is in response to Amy’s guest prompt for dVerse meeting the bar where we are writing free verse, timing ourselves for 9 minutes only, about a period of time in our lives. I chose my teen years, late 50’s, very early 60’s.
I’m more comfortable with a bit of poetic structure, so this is a bit awkward. But it should be fun to read everyone’s mini-memoirs. Most will be, no doubt, a lot more exciting than mine. The 50’s were, well, pretty tame but we didn’t know any better.
sMiLes Victoria..
the first thing that
hits me here is
your price
of Gas
In Nevada..
here in Northwest
Florida i pay
1.89 for a
$19 dollar
fill-up in
my Honda
Civic two-door
coupe..
as opposed
to your $3.73
cents close
to
Casino Land…
but seriously i was
just thinking about the
back to the future of
our gas prices
here.. as i am
paying the
equivalent
of about
75 cents
a gallon vs.
my Sports Utility
vehicle before now..
anyway may the
Force of Oil come down
soon for you too.. in terms
of dollars and sense.. as
Gas iS pouring relatively
free here
for
now..
and thank goodness
we don’t have all
those clouds of
white we have
here when
gas is
19 cents
a gallon.. in
the 60’s of STINKY pollution
here then.. yes.. i’d rather have
expensive gas than
clouds of
poison..
sMiles again..
ups and downs
of using old dead
dinosaurs and
such as that..
to make
a living..;)
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Victoria, this is perfection. Hands-down my favourite.
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So grateful, Misky.
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Wonderful memories of that time of your life. So sorry for the loss of Cris.
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Wonderful memories, so full of nostalgia. Cris left you far too soon. You must really miss her.
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Oh real cherry cokes. A lovely trip down memory lane!
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I really enjoyed this, Victoria; and it is not true at all that most were more exciting than yours. I like poetry that is real & says something about a person and their life; and that is what I got from your writing. Plus I too remember when gas was 25 cents a gallon. I didn’t read Greek tragedies, but did read more Shakespeare and Hardy and Camus than we were required to read. I liked the inner story of the two ‘sisters’ too. And the sad ending jolted me….as life does sometime! A blessed Christmas to you, Victoria!
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Easy going, truthful, straightforward tale. Loved it.
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You have created a perfect memoir in free verse. Your school looks and sounds a lot like mine in the 40’s, but without the car!
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Hi Victoria,
You took me back to a similar time in my life; really took me back!
CheChe
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I love this, Victoria. Life back in the 50s were much simpler and easier somehow…well, maybe except for those dang fire escapes! I liked your backstory of you two sisters, and I had heard before of her too-early demise. So sorry for that.
Enjoy your holidays, Victoria, I’ll see you next year! xoxo
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“have groceries delivered
from Tipton’s meat market
by a pimple-faced kid
(I had the crush but
he wanted her)”
Ouch. 😦
This is my favorite stanza:
“walk to the Copa
after school for cherry
cokes
and boys
from San Marino High.”
I loved reading about these memories.
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Later in 1950, the Korean War started, with “peace”, but Cold War from 1953-1963, while Eisenhower started the interstate freeway system.
this freely-wheeling bit of nostalgia really transported me back to 1950, when I was in first grade; took 10 elementary schools in 6 years for me , becuz we moved so often.
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How sad that she is gone….But you brought us back there Victoria, with all the sights of that bygone year and time ~ Now I recall I hate those fire drills and school uniforms ~
Enjoyed this one Victoria ~ Happy Holidays to you ~
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Such a beautifully moving poem!
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and Cris is gone…oh how that tore my heart. This is a wonderful poem – it doesn’t try to be cool or avant garde or angry or intellectual – it just comes from the heart, from a time when that pimple faced boy was a dream and cherry cokes were mixed at the fountain of a drug store instead of coming premixed in an aluminum can. I really liked this a lot. So far, the best of them all.
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Thank you, Toni. That humbles me.
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Strut it Victoria girl! 🙂
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The atmosphere is well-described, and the photos add the pastel frosting on the top. Enjoyed this!
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The fire escape was on the outside of the building, one of those kinds you see in movies that the bad guys run down to escape. My hands sweat just thinking of it.
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Victoria.. this is so great.. the closing stanza.. that closed all those competitiveness of siblings (of course I wondered about the 7 months).. I really think this became a wonderful poem. Somehow there is something very real about those words that just have spilled on paper…
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I guess it seems real because that’s how it was. Though, I confess, the pimple-faced kid was someone who saddled our horses at a dude ranch in the San Gabriel mountains one summer. Can’t even remember the kid from Tipton’s, though he was a teen, too.
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