Sis’ Daily Haiku Challenge–Purity


Submitted to SiS’ Daily Haiku Challenge, February 2, 2011–http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2011/01/haiku-challenge-28-days-28-haikus-game.htmlĀ 

Purity

Pristine innocence.

Soul reborn, image of God,

Fear not. Walk in Grace.

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14 thoughts on “Sis’ Daily Haiku Challenge–Purity

  1. Jingle says:

    walk in grace,
    love the line.
    well done,
    šŸ˜‰

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  2. Someone is Special says:

    OMG, this is the best I have read.. Hats off to you Victoria.. “Soul Reborn – Image of God” – Lovely…

    PS: Victoria, the best part in you the post topic, whatever challenge you write, the host name is first.. Thanks, Blessed to have you in my Challenge..

    Someone is Special

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  3. varsha says:

    very nicely written victoria !

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  4. Artswebshow says:

    This is a fantastic haiku

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  5. meethimirchi says:

    true brilliance , pure inspiration …

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  6. ladynimue says:

    the last lines are brilliant šŸ™‚

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  7. Jade says:

    The last line serves as a little mantra or guiding principle for the newborn child…This is really beautiful.

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  8. sarah says:

    beautiful and elegant šŸ™‚

    PS – i read somewhere that one should avoid using punctuations in haikus, if not very significant or necessary. Hope u get my point šŸ™‚

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  9. trisha says:

    a piece of heaven- just divine victoria.

    mine is here:

    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com

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  10. Mike Patrick says:

    Such a touching photo. If I may . . .

    Godā€™s angelic child
    Smiles at softly whispered words
    That parents can never hear.

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  11. Oh, how I love this poem and picture. They make a perfect greeting card!

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