Submitted to One Shot Wednesday: http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/ Thanking my husband, David, for 20 years 1/19/91-1/19/11
Old Love
The Love that’s tinged
by Eros
is easier to write,
to live and
to imagine:
the silken touch
of water—
cool caresses in a Lake—
a kiss that tastes
of wine
and sweat.
Subtle sounds of
breath, and
pounding pulses
and images that linger
in the darkness of
a new-moon night.
But as the days grow old
and we, along with them,
diminish,
winter shadows
cannot overwhelm
enduring Love.
You probe the
memory of
a day gone by
and stroke
a shriveled hand.
Then Spring breaks through
in songs of mockingbirds.
Ahh!!! the spring breaks through.. Mocking bird.. loved this one.. thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
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Beautiful…. sweet… I feel inspired after reading this.
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Forgot to say congratulations to you and your husband. I wish you both happiness.
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Thanks, my friend.
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True love that endures through the years is very beautiful and perhaps rare. Thanks for portraying it so wonderfully, Victoria.
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beautiful,
hope that you have a lovely Thursday.
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Thank you, Jingle
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Happy Anniversary of a special union. Lovely, loving poem!
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Lots to be grateful for!
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it tasted like heaven victoria. beautiful, sweet and languid.
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Heaven, yes…but hard work!
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writing this piece or giving love its most beautiful form? both are hard to do.
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Always evolving, ever rekindling, never dying, never flinching – that’s love indeed! And you have put it so beautifully here, Victoria!!
Kudos on this fine One Shot!!
And a very happy anniversary to you and David, my friend!! May you enjoy each other’s company for a looooooooooooooong time to come…
Cheers!!!
🙂
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Thanks, my friend. A day at a time!
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Stop the presses at every dictionary publisher.. The definition for a love poem Has been replaced.
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Wow, Michael! Thank you.
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Victoria, this is just lovely. Congratulations on your 20th. Wonderful. Hugs and best wishes.
We were married for 20 years too. Eight for me. Five for him. And seven for us. 🙂
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Hey, that works!
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Yes it does! 😀
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oh, i love this… love the bit about the hand, and the mockingbirds. absolutely tender and beautiful. thanks so much for stopping by my place the other day.
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Lovely romantic write on lasting love…very nice…bkm
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This is brilliant.
And clearly a very intimate poem.
I read in a comment above about how an enduring relationship takes work and compromise.
My parents have been married for 33 years and my dad says exactly the same thing
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This is such a touching poem – you are lucky to have felt this breadth and depth of love and thank you for sharing a little of it.
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Happy anniversary Victoria! My husband and I will be together 15 years this June. Your words say so well, how it is to be with someone you trust and love.
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If anything…this gives me hope and the belief that love can survive and endure. Powerful, meaningful, and much appreciated. A compelling write that was much enjoyed. Bravo!
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Thanks Natasha…it survives but it does take work! And compromise.
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One would certainly have to have experienced seasoned love to be able to write so well about it.
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Yep! And witnessed it in my work with the elderly.
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Perfectly lovely…so glad I found you through One Shot 🙂
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Thank you.
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Love this very much.
“You probe the
memory of
a day gone by
and stroke
a shriveled hand.”
nice piece.
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Thanks for stopping by, Robert.
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Well crafted – thanks for the kind words.
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Love over time. Well done!
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beautiful !!!
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Happy Anniversary! My husband and I have also endured – 44 years. This line: “Spring breaks through/in songs of mockingbirds” touches my heart. A wonderful tribute to your years together.
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Lovely, – and I speak with experience of love that endures, the kind that shadows do not overcome. I wish you and your husband much happiness now and in the years to come.
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Thank you, Hildred. We are blessed.
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What a powerful poem. The emotion can’t be hidden, you said it well.
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Coming from a woman who has a most powerful poem on her blog! Thanks, Connetta.
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love that endures…there is definitely something to be said of that constant companion…wing mockingbird…nice one shot…
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Thank you, Brian
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