Submitted to SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/p/haiku-challenge.html
Shapeshifting
today I am horse
surging power trampling fear
carry me onward
just a lowly frog
croaking humble songs of praise
ever mindful love
butterfly woman
eternal transformation
beyond death’s darkness
at last I’m eagle
soaring to mountainous realms
touching the Divine.
Victoria C. Slotto, Author 
I love the addendums to the simple Haiku, that gives the form more depth and makes me appreciate it more…thank you for this great example 🙂
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beautifully Finished. Thank you for sharing
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You take on the persona of a different critter in each haiku, each beautifully done. After looking at yours, I took another look at mine; wondering what message I would be sending to a psychologist. Yours are beauty, grace and divinity; mine is savagery. Wonder what that means?
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Superb, Victoria. I loved reading your interpretation of what you saw here. So much… xoxo
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butterfly woman
eternal transformation
beyond death’s darkness
ah .. this was so relatable .. the feelings are always this way 🙂
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Very brilliant and Imaginative
I really enjoyed this 1 😉
Take a look on my Simple Haiku
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Great imagination and a clever creative take!! Beautiful Haiku’s with imagery transformations 🙂
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what a transformation this was a real treat to read!
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victoria this is pure beauty! What a poem. just loved it.
mine is here:
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love your creativity and imagination here.
well done.
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fantastic imagination.. What a way to interpret an image.. Lovely.. this makes a masterpiece.. Pleasure to have you in the challenge Victoria..
Someone is Special
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Fantastic.
Is there a reincarnation theme in this poem.
Haiku as verse, interesting idea
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an awesome interpretation of image. u have so amazingly used the words and the thought behind it is marvellous. a masterpiece in itself. loved it 🙂
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these are beautiful
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all of them very amazing haiku’s … well described well composed
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