Submitted to SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/p/haiku-challenge.html
Regret
I wish I hadn’t–
I believed his words of love
now I am alone.
Victoria C. Slotto, Author
Poetry and More
Submitted to SiS’s Daily Haiku Challenge: http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/p/haiku-challenge.html
Regret
I wish I hadn’t–
I believed his words of love
now I am alone.
Victoria C. Slotto, Author 
Brillant.
Says it all in so few words.
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romantic Victoria.. Awesome..
Someone is Special
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so romantically sad well done!
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Ah, something I think we have all experienced. Captured simply but beautifully.
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Excellent haiku, that artwork is really good too.
Good theme to use.
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Wonderful, a companion piece to my Empty.
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repentance is a killer emotion…and is crafted in this image..amazing take on the prompt..touching!
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Beautiful, Liv. It reminds me of the sentiment in an old poem, except you did it in seventeen syllables. If you ever have the time, take a look. http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/2011/01/20/butterfly/
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I was looking forward to your take … Thank you!
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you perfectly captured the immense pain of that cruel betrayal. nothing hurts more than that i believe.
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A very lonely time indeed… You captured it just right.
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o! I totally understand 😦
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/10/h-ku-10/
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