the marriage of earth and heaven
conjoined by ropes of low-lying clouds
azure skies caress smooth green cheeks
of rolling hills.
i dream once more of aqua kisses,
taste summer spice.
stop! listen to rustling leaves.
warm winds carve swaths in trees
for night stars to peek through at midnight.
Our hostess for dVerse Quadrille Monday is Grace and we all would love to see your poem of exactly 44 words, using the word, GREEN. Wide open opportunity–jump on in.
. A lovely image that could use some sprucing up in reality.
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lovely poem 🙂
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Lush and sensual.
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Love the last stanza Victoria! If only one cares to observe one will notice such helping out among nature’s elements. Great observation!
Hank
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A lovely image that could use some sprucing up in reality. I fear sometimes that the planet my grandchildren will inherit will be bleak & mean-spirited, like captured killer whales that revert to their baser nature & slay their captors. Like Grace, you had me with /I dream of aqua kisses/.
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Gosh I can smell see and taste all of it~!
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OMG, I LOVE this. So gorgeous, from the first word to the last. I think the second stanza is probably my favorite part.
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Such a gorgeous quadrille, Victoria: ‘azure skies caress smooth green cheeks/of rolling hills’ and ‘warm winds carve swaths in trees/for night stars to peek through at midnight.’
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What a beautiful personification of nature!
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Ah, those stars, yes those stars. Lovely!
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Beautiful imagery Victoria! I love your descriptions. ❤
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“smooth green cheeks of rolling hills” is just exquisite!.
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Love this “green cheeks” “aqua kisses” “summer spice”.
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Wow, I adore.. “green cheeks”….what a perfect way to describe those rolling hills….and “aqua kisses”…..very nice! Some beautiful imagery where earth and heaven meet. 🙂
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This is just lovely, Victoria. Delicious, really.
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Ah.. yes.. the above
and below aS
Sky of HeaVen
meets gRound
of Earth.. flaT
dreAms
gRow hiGh
iN SpiRaL FLow..:)
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I specially love this Victoria:
i dream once more of aqua kisses,
taste summer spice.
And the night stars peeking ~ A good metaphor for a relationship too ~
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Beautiful! Love the line …azure skies caress smooth green cheeks…:)
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Audible sigh at the beauty here. Exquisite!
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Beautiful, as always.
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What a wonderful scenery Victoria… the green cheeks makes those rolling hills seem sweet and almost cuddly.
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