regret. perhaps


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regret, perhaps

there are wounds
in your old soul
deeper than word-scars
trolling your mind

words spoken
hidden or feigned
words soaked in-
to your fragile heart

those penned
or not. razor-sharp
tracks that left only shards
of who you once were

or could have become.

Written and linked to dVerse Quadrille, a poem of exactly 44 words that include the word SCAR.

6 thoughts on “regret. perhaps

  1. very powerful…verbal abuse is perhaps the most quiet form we know, less noticed in many ways and yet so deeply lasting in it’s effect.

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  2. Grace says:

    Word-scars are deep Victoria ~ We never forget them.

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  3. They can be the deepest scars, and the least healed.

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  4. whimsygizmo says:

    “word-scars” is fantastic. Sometimes we utter them ourselves. Beautifully done, Victoria.

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  5. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Oh! This is so very moving.. especially; “words spoken hidden or feigned words soaked into your fragile heart” left me breathless…❤️ Beautifully penned.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  6. frankhubeny says:

    I think we all have a lot of razor-sharp word-scars from our pasts.

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